January 23, 2006

None of this

none of this is mine
none of this is me
in a moment, in a flash
you will take it from me;
you will leave.
none of this is mine,
you have made that clear to me
and yet I am here,
living once again (as) a stranger
once again unwanted, a burden, a thing.
none of this is mine
do you even love me?

Dawn Dschaak
written by me on 1/21/06
Thanks Katy, for reminding me to be me.

6 comments:

Fred said...

Nice.

Teacher Sol said...

Is this dedicated to somebody?

katy said...

Awww, that's pretty! I like it. You're really awesome!

Lucy Stern said...

Ah..The Lord giveth and the Lord taketh away.

Rowan Dawn said...

Lucy, I like your interpretation. I din't even see it until I read it again after reading your post!

Susie, go ahead.

Teacher Sol, yes.

Katy and Fred, thanks.

Oh great One said...

Well written! I like your new template too. I'm not sure how new it is since I've been gone so long but I like it anyway!